The first poem is just uncomfortable. With the descriptions and use of words, I think the swan and lady are having sex? This is the most awkward poem Ive ever read, atleast if it is how I interpretted it. By saying a lot of things like "loins, thighs, breasts" it leads me to believe she is stripping for the swan or being raped by a swan? I dont know exactly what the meaning of this is, or if there is supposed to be one. Any meaning out of this text would be a stretch.
Daddy wasnt very enjoyable. It seems like this girl is remembering her father, sort of. She seems unhappy, being that he is no longer around. I guess this could be inspirational or something? Then she try to commit suicide, not very cool. The whole story is kind of a downer, maybe her daddy is referring to god.

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